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Strong Female Characters …

I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again: ‘strong female character’ and ‘kickass hottie’ DON’T have to be mutually exclusive. Sure, there are some great ones out there. B2W isn’t one of those whiney sex negative crit sites that says a woman is diminished by her sexuality. As if!

But it’s not difficult to see why the laydeez in the audience – especially those who love action, like moi – feel a teensy weensy short-changed by heroines in the genre (and story-wide, even).

After all, when studios, producers, filmmakers – and yes, even screenwriters! – say ‘strong female character’, WE GET THIS:

Lady assassins who somehow kick ass in full make up AND keep their hair nice:

Also lady clones who are also weapons who apparently like bondage clothes and don’t find them problematic for fighting AT ALL (erm):

And let’s not forget all the cool-looking lady undead, too (damn those catsuits must be itchy for all eternity):

Fantasy Women

The issue I’ve got with kickass hotties is not that they exist. Hell, I actively enjoy them. The issue is not even that they’re FANTASY WOMEN — fantasy men exist in the action genre too. This is all fine with me. Action should be fun. I haven’t signed up for a documentary or drama, after all.

The issue then is like always — too many fantasy women. Or, if you want to phrase it another way: not enough VARIETY.

Real Strength

If we consider a classic MALE movie hero like John McClane, his appeal comes from his real life attributes. He is:

  • stubborn, savvy, clever
  • courageous, rather than stupid
  • He will do whatever it takes 

This is real strength, rather than the ability to pull off a cat suit and kick some ass with special moves that look great. What’s more, we can relate to McClane because any one of us can BE those three things listed above, if we put our minds to it.

It’s Really About Magnetism

Maybe these days a meathead like Chris Hemsworth or Christian Bale would have played McClane in the first movie, but this was 1987, so it was Bruce Willis. He has a nice face and a lean, hard body, but he was by no means extraordinary to look at.

Instead McClane has presence, he is memorable, he is powerful by virtue of his characterisation. He’s not the biggest guy, so it’s not even about muscles. On this basis, McClane is effortlessly sexy. He doesn’t have time to check his hair or wash his face, he has bad guys to catch! Which is why he always ends up LOOKING LIKE THIS:

John McClane

This is true magnetism, charisma, power … whatever you want to call it. John McClane can literally look like hell and people will find him attractive and/or be impressed by him. Why?

Because it’s about WHO he is, over WHAT he looks like.

In comparison, kickass hotties may be capable, they may even be good characters, but they never reach the John McClane stakes, because as women, they’re required to …

… Look PRETTY!

Female characters are always objectified, because 9/10 the very LEAST they *should* be, is pretty.

Most actors – male OR female – have some modicum of attractiveness, so it could be argued this is the reason. But this is tenuous at best, especially when we factor yet more male heroes whom we can’t take our eyes off, even when they look like hell, such as LOGAN (2017):

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In comparison to previous incarnations of the Wolverine character, Hugh Jackman seriously looks like crap all the way through LOGAN. But that’s okay, it’s part of the character’s arc that he’s dying — oh look, it’s down to his characterisation again! Funny, that.

So, can you think of any female characters, in ANY genre, with the same kind of sexual magnetism as John McClane (or even Logan), even when she looks like hell?

Shockingly, I can think of only one:

Furiosa, from MAD MAX: FURY ROAD (2015)

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Furiosa may not have the ‘classic’ attributes of a woman, but she is still very much a woman. She will fight, but only when she has to.  She is devoted to her sisters; she will do everything in her power to get them away from evil. She is a good communicator, a fast negotiator and a great judge of character. She’s clever, empathetic and a critical thinker. Last of all, back her into a corner? She will take you down.

Oooh guess what! Furiosa basically has the same real life attributes of John MClane! She is:

  • stubborn, savvy, clever
  • courageous, rather than stupid
  • She will do whatever it takes 

Concluding:

This is what we mean when we say we want a ‘strong female character’, rather than a kickass hottie. We want a character like Furiosa – someone who is brave, smart, determined. Someone we’re drawn to, even when the trappings of beauty are stripped away. REAL STRENGTH, from the inside.

So, ask yourself: does your character’s strength come from WITHIN? Would we be drawn to her – sexually or otherwise – via her RAW POWER? Or is it because she looks good? The difference is subtle, but crucial. Good luck!

MORE LINKS

The Ultimate Blueprint On How NOT To Write Female Characters

How To Write Female Leads Like A Professional Screenwriter

How To Use Girl Power In Your Story

5 Ways To Write A ‘Strong, Female Character’

5 Problems With Female Leads

5 Problems With All-Female Casts

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6 Responses to Why Strength Is The Missing Ingredient In Female Leads

  1. Kerensa says:

    Ripley looks pretty knackered in Alien, doesn’t she?

    • Lucy V Hay says:

      ALIENS, yes. First movie she looks pretty good throughout then prances about in her pants! 😉

  2. john ashbrook says:

    Greetings.

    I always used to reach for Ripley and Sarah Connor as the go-to examples of women who were not there to look good, but to actually do something.

    I think your quoting Bruce Willis as John McClane is right on the money – When Die Hard first came out, its USP was that (unlike the Arnie and Sly models that were filling our cinema screens at the time) he wasn’t ripped, he was presented as being just a guy – thinking on his feet, making it up as he went along, getting messy and bleeding from something other than the traditional tasteful cut on the eyebrow.

    He was the next logical step after Indiana Jones, in that way. And, Harrison Ford is, I would suggest, another actor who is good looking but not gorgeous. And, as Indiana Jones, he gets beaten up and he gets dirty.

    The only flaw I can think of in quoting Furiosa – and I’d be interested in your thoughts on this – is that underneath all that oil, sweat and muck … Is Charlize Theron. And, judging from the money she gets for modelling, I think it’s fair to say she’s a looker.

    She was fantastic in the role. She’s grown into a very good actor. But one wonders if she’d have been give the chance to be so good, if she didn’t have that bone structure.

    I recall the 1991 film Frankie And Johnny … Which is about unglamourous, middle-aged, frumpy people still being able to find love. The female lead in the play was Cathy Bates (pre-Misery). She was replaced in the film by Michelle Pfeiffer. Also a fine actor. But it simply wasn’t in her range to play middle-aged, fat and frumpy. Bates had just won her Oscar, so it’s entirely possible she didn’t want the role. Who can say?

    I’m not sure of the point I’m making. I think it probably has something to do with the way that it seems like glamorous girls get the chance to pretend to not be glamorous. Providing they’re only pretending.

    Cheers:

    J

  3. David Liscio says:

    Thanks as always, Lucy, for keeping us writers on point. I’m writing a sequel to Deadly Fare and your sound advice helps ensure that beautiful Hannah Summers will be kickass, blood-spattered, dirt-covered, and not worried that her hair is a mess.

  4. Lilia F says:

    Great piece, as well as funny. Also, how do they fight amazingly in stiletto heels? Also, also, how about a film that understands and works with a woman’s limited physical strength in fighting just one average man, as opposed to taking out half a dozen baddies with no effort?

  5. Jenn Lyons says:

    Yes to all of this. Great piece. I think Geena Davis’s “The Long Kiss Goodnight” is an underappreciated example of this rare breed, too. Too often people think that a ‘strong’ woman is physically strong, and that’s not what we mean at all.

    Funny about Charlize Theron — seen the trailer for Atomic Blond yet? I find myself very curious about this one. For all the sexualizing of the main character that goes on, it’s fairly obvious that by the end of the movie she’s going to be a beat-up mess, as befits a character who clearly is going to do whatever it takes.

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